九年级英语写作指导及范文

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提示：在你的生活经历中，一定和他人因意见不同而争辩过，甚至试图说服对方同意自己的观点。然而不同的人对待事情有不同的看法，或支持，或反对，请以“My Opinion on … ” 为题，用英语写一篇短文。

要求：1. 请把题目补充完整；

2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。

3文中不能使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。

4. 将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。

审题指导：

1. 首先补全文章题目My opinion on outdoor Activities;

2.抓住文体。 本文针对户外活动进行讨论，文体为议论文；

3.抓住重点。根据要点提示可知本文分为两大部分。一是针对开展户外活动谈谈自己的观点看法，二是户外活动中确保安全的做法，二者缺一不可；

4.确定人称。本文要求写出自己的观点和做， 主要使用第一人称。如果谈到客观事情或者第三者，则使用第三人称；

5.把握时态。 由于本文是开展对户外活动的观点看法以及保证安全的做法，主要使用一般现在时。

6.注词数。词数不少于60个。不得出现真是的姓名，校名。

写作指导 对课外活动的看法

开头： 人们对此话题的看法。

1. 觉得对于学生来说不安全（it’s not safe for students to do）
2. 提高学生的实践能力。（it is good for）

正文：作者的看法

1. 户外活动可以拓宽学生的视野（open up one’s eyes）
2. 学习保护环境（protect the environment）
3. 与老师同学相处得更好（go on well with）

结尾：保证安全的做法

学习安全知识（learn  some safety knowledge）

短语与句子

1. Personal view

Some people believe that…, while others think that…

As far as I am concerned/in my opinion

2. Prove the thesis

The reason why …is that…

For one thing… for another…

On the one hand…, on the other hand

First…, second… last but not least…

What’s more, in addition, particularly, in contrast(相比之下)

3. Conclusion

In a word = in brief/total= in all/short

As a result; above all; therefore

From the above; I hope…

It is clear that…

As we all know/it is well-known that…

As/so far as I know…

Only in this way can we achieve our goal

In my view, I hold the point of view that…

I am sure my opinion is both…and…

 

写作模板

The topic of 主题     is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of支持A的理由一. What’s more, 理由二. Moreover, 理由三.

While others think that B is a better choice for the following three reasons. Firstly,支持B的理由一，secondly(besides), 理由二. Thirdly(finally),理由三.

From my point of view, I think 我的观点. The reason is that 原因. As a matter of fact, there some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.

 

My Opinion on Outdoor Activities

Nowadays, the topic of outdoor activities is becoming more an more popular. Some people think it is not for students to do man outdoor activities. While others think it is good for students to improve their practice ability.

In my opinion, we can learn more knowledge and open up our eyes b doing that. What’s more, it is a good way for us to learn to protect the environment b staying close to nature. And we can get on well with our teachers and classmates. We should learn some safety knowledge more often before these outdoor activities. That is more helpful to protect and save ourselves.

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提示：成长过程中，总会有一段难忘的经历陪伴过你.也许是和朋友出去旅行,也许是学会了一项新的技能……这些事情让我们喜悦或兴奋,同时也给我们带来一段美好的回忆.请你以”An Unforgettable Experience”为题,写一篇短文,描述一件难忘的事.

审题指导:

1.本篇文章需要回忆成长中一段难忘的经历，所以文体为记叙文；

2.回忆自己的一段时光，人称为第一人称；

3. 叙述过去的事,时态以一般过去时为主;

写作指导:

开头: 引出话题

每个人成长过程中都有一段难忘的时光(never forget)

正文: 讲述发生的事情

去培训独立生活两天:早起,自己做饭,洗衣服,收拾房间,照顾自己等.(do everything by ourselves, get up very early, cook, wash or even make beds, look after oneself)

结尾：自己的收获或活动的意义。

明白独立的重要性（the importance of independence）

短语与句子

1. who

Family, parents, teacher, friend, classmate, grandparents

2. when

Today, yesterday, in the future, last night, the day after tomorrow, the day before yesterday, five days ago, this week, next week, a week ago, this year, next year, three months ago

3. where

At home, in our school, in the classroom, on the playground, in the street, on the way to, at the party, in the restaurant/hospital

4. what

Happen/take place, go shopping, plant trees, do housework/sports, have a picnic, go to see the movies, take part in a party, English Speech Competition, look after m sister well, receive a precious present from my father, help an old man go across the street

5. feeling

Affect/effect, unforgettable, happy, surprised, lucky, nice, meaningful, interesting, colorful, lively, happy/ pleased, satisfying, popular, important, exciting, helpful, knowledgeable, be helpful to/for sb

写作模板

Among various kinds of things in my mind,  事件is the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable one.

The story happened on 时间in/on/at地点. On the way to school/ the cinema, I 记人和事。Without thinking, I  事情经过。

When I reached school/ the cinema, the classes/film have/has finished.

But I 抒发自己的感想。From the story/ experience I 收获或明白了什么道理。

An unforgettable Experience

As we grow up, there must be something that we’ll never forget.

When I was 13 years old, I had some training with my classmates. We went to a village and we needed live in a small room for two days. We did everything by ourselves. Our parents couldn’t help us, because they didn’t stay with us. We got up very early in the morning. We had to clean ourselves quickly. And then we stood in a line. We learn a lot of things there, such as coking, washing and even making beds. Every day, we had to do farm work more than three hours. Since then, I have learnt how to look after myself.

I also realized the importance of independence. What an unforgettable experience it was!

 

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提示：生活中我们难免会遇到各种各样的事，身心的或是心灵的。如何保持身心畅快是我们的追求所在。请以“How to keep…”为题写篇英语短文。

要求：1. 请把题目补充完整；

2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。

3文中不能使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。

4. 将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。

审题指导：

1. 首先补全文章题目How to keep healthy
2. 本文是建议类文章，文体为议论文，写作时用第一人称和第三人称，时态用一般现在时。

写作指导

开头：引出主题

健康是最重要的（the most important thing）

正文：给出保持健康的建议

1.饮食健康（eat healthily）

2. 锻炼身体 （take exercise）

3.心情愉快 （stay happy）

4.交朋友（make friends）

结尾：自己的感受

1. 保持健康很重要（Keep healthy）
2. 拥有更好的生活 （live a better life）

短语与句子

Suggestions

1. had better (not) do
2. How about/ what about doing sth
3. I think you should do
4. I suggest that you should do
5. If I were you, I would do…
6. Why notdo/ Why don’t you do…..?
7. It is highly suggested that you should (not)….

Expectation

1. look forward to  care for   grow up
2. I hope that he can take good care of himself.
3. I wish you can give me more care and love.

写作模板

In recent days, we have to face a 事件，which is becoming more and more serious.说明事件或问题。Therefore, we should take a series of effective measures to solve 事件或问题。Here are some suggestions on solving 事件或问题。

First of all,建议一，then,建议二，finally,建议三.

In a word, I believe that 总结性的话语。

How to Keep Healthy

What’s the most important thing in the world? I think it is to be healthy. Then how can we keep healthy?

First, we must eat healthily. We should eat meat, vegetables, fruit and other kinds of food. Second, taking exercise is also very important. It can help us build up a strong body. What’s more, we must stay happy all the time. I think making friends is one of the best ways to help us stay happy.

In a word, keeping healthy is very important. When we are healthy, we can live a better life.

 

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提示：随着年岁的增长，我们对事物的认识也更为深刻。如我们越来越意识到健康的意义，朋友的意义或是旅行的意义。请以“The Meaning of…”为题写篇英语作文。

要求：1. 请把题目补充完整；

2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。

3文中不能使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。

4. 将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。

审题指导：

1. 首先补全作文题目，以“The Meaning of Traveling”为题。本文谈论旅行的意义，顾文体为说明文；
2. 谈论旅行的好处即旅行的以所在，使用一般现在时；人称为第一第三人称交替使用；

写作指导：

开头： 引出话题

1.旅行变得很流行（traveling is becoming more and more popular）

2. 旅行的意义（the meaning of traveling）

正文：旅行的意义

1. 感到高兴 （feel happy）
2. 放松自己 (relax oneself)
3. 学习东西 (learn something)
4. 发现自然美 (the beauty of nature)
5. 了解文化习俗 (local cultures and customs)

结尾： 寻求观点

旅游之你见（your opinion on traveling）

The Meaning of Traveling

Traveling is becoming more and more popular. But do you know the meaning of traveling?

Many people like traveling because they just feel happy while traveling. Some people go traveling to relax themselves. Sometimes traveling is really a good way to forget worries in work or sadness in life. While traveling, we can learn something, such as finding the beauty of nature, knowing more about local cultures and customs, enjoying different kinds of delicious food and making more friends. I like traveling, too. In fact, traveling is a kind of sports. We will stay healthy if we often go traveling in our free time.

Do you like traveling? Can you tell me your opinion on traveling?

 

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提示：加入你是琳达，经过紧张的学习之后，你刚刚考完期末考试。你决定你本周末好好放松一下自己。请你以“My Weekend Plan”为题，向大家介绍下你的周末计划。

要求：1. 请把题目补充完整；

2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。

3文中不能使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。

4. 将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。

审题指导：

1. 介绍关于如何度过周末的计划，写作时必须包含所给的提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 本文介绍周末计划，文体为记叙文。人称主要用第一人称，时态以一般将来时为主；

写作指导

开头： 引出话题

经过紧张的学习，我决定本周末好好放松自己（a period of, decide to…）

正文：介绍周末两天的决定及安排

1. 周六上午打算看电视放松一下（watch TV to relax myself）
2. 我喜欢看喜剧和卡通片 ( liking doing sth, watch comedies and cartoons)
3. 周六下午打算去书店买几本书 (go to a bookstore, buy some books)
4. 周日去拜访爷爷奶奶，帮助他们做家务( visit my grandparents, help sb do sth)

结尾：对周末的期望

希望自己过一个愉快而又意义的周末( happy and meaningful)

 

My Weekend plan

After a period of busy study, I decide to make plans to relax myself this weekend.

On Saturday morning, I’m going to watch TV to relax myself after a long week’s study. I like watching comedies and cartoons. On Saturday afternoon, I’m going to a bookstore to buy some books. Reading is one of my hobbies. On Sunday, I’m going to visit my grandparents because I miss them very much. I’ll help them do some housework.

I hope I will have a happy and meaningful weekend.

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提示：生活中有许多令人喜爱的事物，如喜爱的季节，最喜爱的电影，最喜爱的节日，最喜爱的发明等。请把题目补充完整，写一篇英语作文，介绍自己最喜爱的事物。

要求：1. 请把题目补充完整；

2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。

3文中不能使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。

4. 将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。

审题指导：

1. 首先补全文章题目 My favorite Invention;
2. 人称以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时。
3. 内容包括：你最喜欢的发明是什么；喜欢这项发明的原因；这项发明能做什么。

写作指导：

开头：引出最喜欢的发明

最喜欢的发明是笔记本电脑 （the laptop is my favorite）

正文： 介绍这项发明

1. 特点：轻而小，便于携带（be easy to）
2. 作用：工作，学习，娱乐，获得信息，可以与朋友家人保持联系（work，study，entertain ourselves, get information, keep in touch with）

结尾： 表达看法

未来人人都会有笔记本电脑（have his or her own laptop）

短语与句子：

任务介绍类：

1. be good at/ do well in…
2. like making friends
3. He enjoys sports and is good at playing basketball.
4. Parents’ love is the greatest one in the world.
5. I will never forget my dear friends.
6. Thanks for those who help me in m life.

学校生活介绍类

1. decide to do sth. 2. Have a party 3. Give a speech 4. Do some reading
2. busy but interesting

介绍自己的理想

1. I believe my life in the future will be…
2. sb. Wants to be a(n)…when she/he grows up.
3. If you want to make your dream come true, you should…

节日介绍类

1.  …is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals
2. It has long history, which is in honor of sb.
3. People celebrate the day by…and…
4. Festivals play an important role in Chinese culture.
5. It is our duty to respect the tradition and make Chinese culture known to the world.

家乡介绍类

1. different kinds of
2. It lies in the city center and …
3. There are many … in our…
4. Let me introduce sth. to you.

动物介绍类

1. I like …best of the animals.
2. They have… and they eat…
3. They only live in…and… is their favorite.
4. They are in danger now.
5. There are fewer and fewer… in the world. So we should take action to protect them.
6. We should create a better environment to protect the endangered…
7. I hope they will live happily.

写作模板

I love/like某物because it attracts me not only 具体原因一but also具体原因二. What’s more/moreover, 其他原因。

In a word, it is 意义for 某人to do 某事. I also achieved some experience to make it come true. I feel/hope 感受、愿望. I love 所介绍的事物。

 

My Favorite Invention

Of all the modern inventions, the laptop is m favorite one. I think it is the most amazing invention.

Laptops are light and small. They are easy to carry. With a laptop, we can work, study and entertain ourselves everywhere. A laptop can connect to the network, through which we can get the latest information whenever we want. Using a laptop, I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mail and QQ at any time in any place.

I think everybody will have his or her own laptop in the future.

 

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提示：帮助老人是中华民族的传统美德。然而在当今社会，这一美德却备受争议。针对社会上广泛讨论的关于应不应该帮助处于困境中的老人的话题，请谈谈你的观点和看法。

要求：

1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。

2.文中不能使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。

3.将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。

审题指导：

1.本文针对该不该帮助老人这一社会现象提出自己的观点和看法，文体为议论文；

2. 根据所给文章的要求来看，本文主要分为两大部分。一是自己的观点，二是自己的做法，二者缺一不可；

3.本文要求写出自己的观点和做法，主要使用第一人称。如果客观事物或者第三者，则使用第三人称；

4. 由于本文是对某一社会现象的看法观点，主要使用一般现在时。

写作指导

开头： 引出话题

应不应该帮助处于困境中的老人 （help the old, in trouble）

正文：表达观点和看法

1. 我认为我们应该帮助处于困境中的老人（I think we should…）

2.帮助老人的原因 （a traditional virtue）

结尾：弘扬正能量

尽管每个人的观点不同， 但是我相信还是好人多（Although…there are still…）

Should we help the old in trouble?

Today there is a hot topic discussed by the people about whether to help the old in trouble or not.

I think we should help the old in trouble because helping the old is a traditional virtue in china. In fact, I believe most of the students really want to help the old. However, sometimes helping those old people who aren’t really in trouble may cause much trouble for themselves. Those old people actually want to get some money by cheating others, especially young and kind students.

Although every person has different thoughts, I believe there are still many good people in the society.

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孔子说过“夫孝，德之本也”，母爱至深，母爱无价。请以“I love My Mother”为题写一篇文章，来讲述一下你和母亲之间的真情古事。

要求：

1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。

2.文中不能使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。

3.将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。

审题指导：

1. 本文介绍自己与母亲之间的故事,文体为记叙文.
2. 回忆自己与母亲过去的事,时态要用一般过去时,抒发个人的感情及感悟用一般现在时,描述将来梦想时,则多用一般将来时.

3.写作中应注意描述的全面性,叙述一些具体的事例.

写作指导:

开头: 点题

每个人都需要爱,我深爱我的母亲(love my mother deeply)

正文： 描述自己经历的事情，折射出母亲的爱

1. 总是为我买学习上需要的东西（buy whatever I need for my study）
2. 有点小感冒，都是母亲带我看医生（bring me to see a doctor by herself）

结尾：抒发情感

长大后让母亲过得幸福（grow up, make my mother happy）

I Love My Mother

Everyone needs love. I love my mother deeply.

My mother is a farmer. She looks old even though she’s only 45 years old because she has to work hard in the field every day. My mother does a lot for me. She always buys whatever I need for my study, even though she doesn’t have much money. When I have a little cold, she will bring me to see a doctor by herself. What’s more, she cooks delicious and healthy food for me.

When I grow up, I will do whatever I can do make my mother happy.