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假如你是Kate，今天发生了一些不开心的事，请你根据提示以“An unlucky day”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点：1.因为闹钟没有响，早上起床晚了；
2．没赶上校车，不得不步行去上学；
3．到校后，老师让交家庭作业时，才发现作业落在了家里；
4．文章结尾进行总结：糟糕的一天。
An unlucky day
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An unlucky day
I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off. When I woke up, it was 7：10. So I washed my face quickly and ran to the bus stop without breakfast. By the time I got there,the school bus had already gone. I missed it. So I had to walk to school. Finally, when I got to school, it was already 9：10. I was late for class. When the teacher asked for my homework, I found I had left it at home. What a bad day it was!
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以Kate的身份，用第一人称的方式讲述不开心的一天；讲述过去的事情，用一般过去时；书写时要注意用全所给材料，文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文按时间顺序got up late this morning…7：10….By the time I got there，…when I got to school…When the teacher asked for my homework讲述今天发生过不愉快的事情，文字表达清楚，内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点：短语：get up late；wash my face quickly ；run to the bus stop without breakfast；be late for class.；ask for；leave it at home
句型：原因状语从句I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off.；
时间状语从句By the time I got there, the school bus had already gone；
宾语从句When the teacher asked for my homework, I found I had left it at home；
感叹句What a bad day it was!
【点睛】本篇是材料作文，书写前要认真他阅读题干，了解题干的要求，叙述发生过的事情用一般过去式时；书写时要围绕题干提示的要点，按时间顺序、有条理地讲述自己不幸的一天。
